Keith William Pie a écrit :Voilà j'ai écrit un morceau qui raconte l'histoire d'un brony qui ne supportant plus son monde ne souhaite qu'aller dans Equestria et fini par y arriver. Je crois que beaucoup ici voudrez y aller

Voici la chanson :

A Brony's Wish

This is some girly thing
This is just some fantasy
I joined the herd
And I'm proud of it
There's the mane six
Who make me laugh and dream
In this bad world where the evil
Are always here

I would like to go here
Forever
And never come

Come signifie venir, donc je pense que c'est mal employé. Dans ce cas, rajoute "back" après.

In my world
One day I'll see Dashie
Fly over me

Dashie, your rainbow mane
Tell me to come in Equestria
And fly with you in the sky
Pinkie, you made me laugh
When I'm feeling bad or not
And when I'm feeling so alone
Twilight, you are in your book
And your magic can may be
Help me to come near you
AJ, I want your cider
Which is looking so tasty
I can drink a lot of this

Dans ce cas, mets could à la place.

Fluttershy, you are so cute
With your animals and young fillies
And learn to talk with them
Rarity, I want to be dressed by you
You are the best in the fashion thing
Where I live it's expencive

One day my dream became true
Rainbow Dash, flow over me

You are laughing, ya ?
I'm not laughing
Yes you're laughing

C'est ce qui m'a le plus impressionné. Je pense que tu devrais carrément supprimer ce bout de paroles.
I was smoking on the street
When I saw her, I didn't believe
What I saw

She landed next to me
And we talked together
It's impossible !
She comes from a cartoon

OMG it's the real Dashie

Princess Celestia asked me
To come in Equestria
But I'll be transformed in pony
She put her corn on my head
The travel began


I miss my family
I left my darling
I miss my friends
Forever

Dashing je l'ai modifié (titre et deux trois mots)

Alors vous en pensez quoi ?

SkeletonCreek a écrit :
Sinon, le reste est superbe, bravo, ça ferait une bonne chanson, peut-être l'hymne du site.